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Zeitforge's avatar

I loved this! The push and pull between David’s scientific doubt and the TV show’s obvious scripting felt so real, and honestly, a lot of writers know that struggle. That twist with the present-day Angus Bright totally caught me off guard. It was creepy in the best way. It's proof that the best stories are usually hiding under all the made-up ones.

Nigel Code, Author's avatar

Thank you so much, that is very kind.

I do have fun with David’s stories. The more I discover as I study parapsychology, the more I feel convinced that beneath all the nonsense there are things that we still need to explain, and may one day teach us something useful. It is certainly a fascinating subject.

Zeitforge's avatar

It is fascinating to hear that you study parapsychology. That explains why David feels so grounded as a character. It makes the skeptical side of the story feel much more authentic when it is backed by actual research.

I agree that the most compelling part of these stories is the small percentage that remains unexplained. It is that hidden layer that really keeps a reader engaged. I am looking forward to seeing where you take David and Janet next!

Echoes of Elsewhere's avatar

Thank you - great to read David and Janet again. Not sure why this did not appear in my feed yesterday. But a treat before doing some studying!

Nigel Code, Author's avatar

The algorithm has a mind of its own. I check emails because I can never rely on it showing me things I ask to be shown.

Thank you for your kind words. Happy studying.

Cecilia Dart-Thornton's avatar

An enthralling read, Nigel! A real “page-turner”.

Nigel Code, Author's avatar

Wow, thank you. I think you mean page scroller, we are after all on ‘devices’ here folks. :)